@DMakarios I listen to a lot of audio books and thought that was pretty good. You were quite clear. There were a couple of times where you spoke a little quickly and it was hard to understand. I didn't catch what the whisper said. I think having pauses in the narration, at appropriate moments, helps the listener to visualize and be immersed in the scene. You have such great descriptive powers! You should let the listeners soak it all in.🙂